英语六级作文范文：音乐明星得到高奖励？

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do pop stars deserve high rewards ?

it seems that pop star s today enjoy a privileged style of living . wher ever they go , thousand s of people turn out to greet them . t he crowds go wild t rying to catch a brief glimpse of their smiling , colour fully-dressed idols . sta rs a re s ur rounded by their managers , pr es s-agents , and often by their bodyguards . photographs of them appear regular ly in the pr es s and all their coming s and goings a re r epor ted , as star s ar e news . they must con st antly avoid meeting cr azy fans , par ticularly teenagers who idolise them . some people say that st ars are no longe r private individuals , but public proper ty . t he financial rewa rds they receive for this sacrifice is incalculable .

is it right that the st ars s hould be paid in this way ? it’s all very well for people engaged in many othe r professions to envy the s ucces ses and rewards of these stars . howeve r , those who make enviou s remark s s hould remembe r that the most famous star s r epresent only the tip of an iceberg . for every famou s sta r , the re ar e h undr eds of other s st ruggling to earn a living . a man who at tempts to become a star is taking enormous risks . he knows at the outset that only a handful of competitors ever get to the very top . he knows that year s of concent rated effor ts may be rewa rded with complete failure . but he knows that the rewa rds for successes are very high indeed , and if he achieves the goal , he cer tainly earns them .

cet6六级作文结构分析：

· sta rs — a privileged group of people

* sur rounded by crazy fans , no longer private

individuals

* enormous financial rewa rds

· do sta rs deserve high reward s ?

* a rgument ( 1) famous sta rs — tip of an icebe rg

* a rgument ( 2) a ris k-taking job

* a rgument ( 3) deserve high rewa rds if s ucces sful

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cet6六级作文内容分析：

本文是一篇议论文。文中作者的论点不同于一般人的论点。大多数人往往会认为流行歌星的'报酬过高, 但作者却认为能成名者不过是“ 冰山一角”, 而他们所经过的训练和付出的劳动是十分艰苦的, 所以得到了高报酬也无可非议。