中学英语满分作文范文

Ⅲ 写作(共两节，满分40分)

第一节 基础写作(共1小题;满分15分)

你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。

请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物。

姓 名：Allan Stewart

国 籍：澳大利亚

出生日期：1915年3月7日

世界纪录：2006年获硕士学位*时年龄最大

学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。

第一个学位：1936年获得

第二个学位：医学博士**

第三个学位：80多岁时决定学习法律，2006年获得硕士学位。

第四个学位：2012年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学习时间，受到老师表扬。

*硕士学位：master's degree;**博士：doctor

只能用5个句子表达全部内容。

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。

满分作文1

Allan Stewart, born on 7th March, 1915 in Australia, got his first degree in 1936 and then became a Doctor of Medicine.

斯图尔特艾伦，出生于第七日，1915在澳大利亚，获得了他的第一个学位，在1936，然后成为一名医生。

In 2006, he got his third degree—master’s degree and created a world record, for he was the oldest one.

在2006，他得到了他的第三度硕士学位，并创造了世界纪录，因为他是最古老的。

In his eighties he was determined to study law and in 2012 he got his fourth degree through his learning from the network. And he was good at reasonable arrangements for study time, so he was praised by his teachers. He strongly believes that it’s a self-chanllenge and nerver too late.

在他八十年代，他下定决心要学习法律，2012岁的他通过网络学习获得了第四个学位。他在合理安排学习时间，所以受到了老师的表扬。他坚信，这是一种自我的挑战，不要太晚。

I like reading in my free time. I’ve read all kinds of books which are written by many famous writers from all over the world. But I like a Chinese writer best. His name is Xu Zimo.

在我空闲时我喜欢阅读。我已经读过很多来自世界各国的著名作家写的各种各样的书。不过，我最喜欢的一个作家是中国的。他的名字叫徐志摩。

Xu Zhimo was born in a big family. His parents were good at writing and his father taught little Xu by himself. When Xu Zhimo was very young, he was interested in reading. Fables, stories or novels were his favorites and he often nearly forgot eating and Xu was about six years old, he began to write some short stories. He was always practising writing and he did better and better. But he still kept on reading, because he always believed that “Reading makes a full man, a ready man and an exact man.”

徐志摩出生在一个大家庭。他的父母都擅长写作，他的父亲亲自教导他。徐志摩年轻时，他对阅读很感兴趣。寓言、故事或小说是他的最爱，为了这些他经常差点忘了吃和睡。当徐大约六岁时，他开始写一些短篇故事。他总是练习写作，他也写得越好越好。但他仍不停地阅读，因为他总是相信“阅读使人充实,使人机敏和使人严谨。”

When he grew up, his life dream came true. He became a world-famous writer. Not only Chinese but also people from other countries worshiped Xu Zimo. His writing was enjoyed by all the people. Everybody thought that Xu’s works were so nice and great. From his writing, people can understand a lot. I have learnt that if someone wants to be a great person, he must work hard!

当他长大后,他的梦想实现了。他成为了一个世界闻名的作家。不仅中国还有来自其它国家的人崇拜徐志摩。他的作品受到很多人的喜爱。每个人都认为徐的作品是如此美好和伟大的。从他的作品中，人们懂得了很多。我懂得了如果一个人想成为一个伟大的人,他必须努力工作!

Now, let’s enjoy one of Xu’s verses:On Leaving Cambridge Again Quietly I leave, as quietly I came here, quietly I take my wave to the rosy clouds in the werstern sky

现在,让我们欣赏徐志摩的其中一首诗：再别康桥，轻轻的我走了，正如我轻轻的来;我轻轻的招手，作别西天的`云彩。

题目：

安徽黄山被联合国教科文组织定为世界自然文化遗产。假设外国友人到你校参观后，准备去旅游。请根据要点向外国友人简单介绍黄山（ the Yellow Mountain ）。

（ 1 ）位于安徽南部，是中国著名的旅游胜地。每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。（ 2 ）乘汽车去大约要花 3 个小时；也可以乘火车或飞机去。（ 3 ）登山便可领略其云海（ the sea of clouds ）、奇松（ wondrous pines ）、怪石（ unique rocks ）等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。

注意 1 ?词数： 80 词左右。 2 ?请不要逐字翻译。

满分作文：

The Yellow Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the south of Anhui. Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there. It‘s not far from here. It takes you about three hours to get there by bus. You can also go there by train or by plane. While you are climbing the mountain， you can enjoy the sea of clouds， wondrous pines and unique rocks around you. In the early morning when the sun rises， the sky looks very beautiful. It’s really a nice place to visit.

黄山是中国最著名的山脉。它位于安徽南部。每年都有成千上万的中国人和外国人那里参观。离这儿不远。大约要三个小时，乘公共汽车到那里。你也可以乘火车或飞机去。当你爬山时，你可以享受的云海，奇妙独特的松树和你周围的岩石。清晨，当太阳升起的时候，天空看起来非常漂亮。这真是一个很好的地方。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have learned from an advertisement that your company is in need of a secretary. I would like you to consider me for the position.

My name is Li Min. I am twenty-three years old. I am studying business management in Xiamen University. I will graduate this summer. I am familiar with computer operation and office softwares, which can help me do the office work very well. And I have learned English for ten the past two years, I have been an editor for the English Paper of my department. My grades come out top in my department. What's more, I like office work very much and I also think that I can be competent for the I could have the opportunity to get the job I will be quite appreciative.

Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully

Li Min

亲爱的先生或女士：

我从一则广告上得知你们公司需要秘书。我希望您考虑一下我。

我叫李敏，23岁，现在在厦门大学学习经济管理，今年夏季即将毕业。我精通计算机操作及办公软件的使用，这可以帮助我做好办公室工作。我学了十年英语。在过去的两年里我一直担任本系英语报的一名编辑。我的成绩在系里名列前茅。另外，我非常喜欢办公室工作并且我也认为我能胜任这个工作。如果我能有机会得到这份工作，我会非常感激。

谢谢您的考虑。我盼望着您的回信。

您忠实的朋友 李敏

【试题回放】

一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其 写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括：

1.地点：距白山入口处500米;

2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间)，150元/天;热水淋浴;3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免费开放; 5.欢迎预定。

注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.

欢迎光临白山山宾馆！

白山酒店正式开张营业。

500米远的白山入口处，它提供单人房间，它的价格是100元／天，号码是20，和15个双人间，一个价格150元人民币/天。它还提供热水澡服务。你可以在餐厅里享受中西方的食物，在咖啡馆喝咖啡和茶。游泳池是免费开放的一天。所有这些服务都能给你带来极大的方便，而且非常愉快。所以来享受你自己！

欢迎来到白山预订房间。

【名师点评】

本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利

好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉快。

评析：bring great convenience，带来便利。

The seats in our school reading-room are not enough for all the students. Many people get there very early to "seize" a seat every day. So do I. One day a "special" thing happened to me. And I learned a lesson that I shall never forget.

It happened on a Wednesday morning last January, just before our final examation. I got to the reading-room very early to occupy a seat. I put a book on the desk and then went to have breakfast. But when I hurried back into the reading-room, I found someone was sitting on the seat which I had occupied in advance. I ran to him immediatly and shouted at him angrily, "Go away. It's my seat." Everyone raised their eyes and stared at me unfriendly. My face turned red and I felt ashamed of myself. I took my book and fled helter-skelter before so many eyes.

I dared not go to the reading-room for several days. I learned a lesson in the reading-room. Since then I have been keeping the lesson in mind: To be polite to everyone.

我们学校阅览室里的座位不多。每天很多人都很早就去“抢”座，我也是如此。一天，我经历了一件特殊的事，并从中学到了令我终生难忘的教训。

这件事发生在去年一月份一个星期三的早晨，就在期末考试之前。我很早就到阅览室占了一个座位，然后去吃早饭。但当我匆忙返回到阅览室时，却发现一个人正坐在我占的座位上。我立即跑过去，对他生气地嚷道：“走开，这是我的座位。”阅览室里所有的人都抬起头来，异样地看着我。我的脸一下子变红了，我为自己的行为感到惭愧。在众目睽睽之下，我拿起书狼狈地跑了出去。

一连好几天，我都不敢去阅览室。我在阅览室里得到了一个教训。从那以后，我一直铭记着这个教训：礼貌地对待每个人。

The seats in our school reading-room are not enough for all the students. In order to "seize" a seat, I go there very early every morning. Just because of this, a special story happened to me one day. I learned a lesson in the reading-room that I will remember all my life.

It took place on a Monday morning in October. After occupying a seat in the reading-room, I went to fetch a bottle of boiled water. When I returned to the reading-room, I found that a girl student was sitting on my seat. Immediately I ran to her and shouted at her angrily, "Why have you taken my seat? Go away.!" Everybody in the reading-room looked up from their books at me unfriendly. At once I brushed with shame. I rushed out of the reading-room with my book. I can never forget those "eyes".

This is the lesson I've learned in the reading-room: I shall respect other people.

我们学校阅览室里的座位不是很多。为了“抢”座位，我每天早晨很早就去阅览室。正是因为这个，我经历了一件很特殊的事。我在阅览室里学到一个终生难忘的教训。

这件事发生在十月的一个星期一的早晨。占了一个座位后，我就去打瓶开水，回来时却发现一位女生正坐在我的位置上。我立即跑了过去，生气地嚷道：“为什么坐我的座位?让开!”阅览室里所有的人都抬起头，异样地看着我。我很羞愧，脸一下子就红了。我拿起书，冲出了阅览室。我永远都不会忘记那些眼睛。